Anigamer251

Hey Brian, I had a few ideas for quirk evolutions I'd like to toss your way. And I apologize in advance for the wall of text.
          
          Momo Yaoyorozu 
          [Creation] —> [Creation and Absorption]
          •Description: User can create any non-living thing from their lipids. User can also absorb any material and coat their body with it.
          •Drawbacks: Extended use can cause mild to extreme physical exhaustion. Use limited to user's knowledge of materials atomic makeup and processing.
          Inspired by Marvel's Absorbing Man, Ben 10's Kevin Leven, and Power Rangers SPD Pink Ranger
          
          Kyoka Jiro
          [Earphone Jack] —> [Sound of the Heart]
          •Description: User has speakers and jack ports all over her body. Earphone Jacks attached to her ears allow for enhanced hearing and projecting the sound of her heartbeat as a sound-based attack. User can plug the jacks into the ports around her body to enhance her attacks or into the back of her neck for a powerful scream similar to Present Mic.
          •Drawbacks: Extended use can cause numbing and pain in arms and legs and sore throat.
          •Speaker locations: 3 going down the calves of each leg, 2 on the bottom of each foot, 1 on each palm
          •Jack port locations: 1 on each shoulder, 1 on the outside of each thigh, and 2 on the back of the neck.
          Inspired by Iida, Bakugo, and Power Rangers Dino Thunder yellow ranger.
          
          Ibara Shiozaki
          [Vines] —> [Gaia's Blessing]
          •Description: User can control/manipulate all forms of plants. User can also cover themselves in armor-like wood and regenerate using nutrients stored from photosynthesis.
          •Drawbacks: Regeneration requires nutrients. More extensive regeneration requires more nutrients and potentially for user to 'Root' themselves into the ground to absorb more nutrients.
          Inspired by Kamui Woods, Marvel's Groot, and Ben 10's Wildvine.
          
          These are the quirk evolutions I though up. And I would like to ask if these three girls could be added to Izuku's harem.
          

Anigamer251

@BrianClarkJosh That's fine. Just some ideas I wanted to toss around. As for the harem, again it's fine. Maybe another book?
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BrianClarkJosh

First thing, it isn’t a harem. I wanted to write a story without a harem element and felt like doing it this way. Sure, it’s two girls, but I wouldn’t call it a harem. Second thing, the point of the evolutions are that they mostly happen before people are ready. Leading to a painful or improper evolution. I did think of doing a variation after “Forced Evolution” is over where it plays on the concept of Smokescreen awakening during the joint training instead of Black Whip. The quirk going out of control leads to the smoke covering everyone present and imbuing them with One For All. Leading to proper quirk evolutions and some interesting interactions with Izuku. If I do the other version eventually, then I can definitely include these. Though the current story just doesn’t work with what you suggested. I’m sorry
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FanficFanatics77

Hey Brian, I hope you are doing great I'm the creator behind the YouTube channel Greenbean Fiction & Fanfic Fanatics. I love all your stories they are all great. It's been a while since you were active so I'm adapting your stories in audio format to spread it to wider audiences & yeah with proper credits to you. If you have any issues kindly inform me I'll take the videos down. Have a great day thanks.

BrianClarkJosh

Dawg, I literally updated Forced Evolution a couple days ago. You might want to check it out. Also, do what you want to. I don’t really do anything except plot.
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