OMG!!!! I just read your story. I came buckets, I'm still hard just thinking about it. You are an amazing writer, l love your imagination, and I really think you should write more. A lot more.
@JadenGiles2 thanks very much. I'm glad you came buckets..that's the idea. I'll probably start another book that follows on from this one but would love some ideas...maybe a school teacher involved? Not sure. PM me.