Brianna170402

I’m rewriting chapters for my Resident Evil/The Originals books. Looking back at them, you can tell I barely started writing and that it’s my first ever book. 

Brianna170402

@Titan-682 yeah I believe I always confided in you because you started putting books way before me. You were my only guidance on this at the time. I can’t thank you enough for helping me with things
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Titan-682

@Brianna170402 honestly you’ve come a long way back when I first encountered this series I think before Covid hit. Like damn and I had began watching the entire movie franchise as a young adult since I had only seen halfway of the second movie when I was a kid. 
          	  
          	  You only had book one and two and a few stories before you went past 10 books till today.
          	  
          	  Such a long time ago
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Brianna170402

I’m rewriting chapters for my Resident Evil/The Originals books. Looking back at them, you can tell I barely started writing and that it’s my first ever book. 

Brianna170402

@Titan-682 yeah I believe I always confided in you because you started putting books way before me. You were my only guidance on this at the time. I can’t thank you enough for helping me with things
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Titan-682

@Brianna170402 honestly you’ve come a long way back when I first encountered this series I think before Covid hit. Like damn and I had began watching the entire movie franchise as a young adult since I had only seen halfway of the second movie when I was a kid. 
            
            You only had book one and two and a few stories before you went past 10 books till today.
            
            Such a long time ago
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Garydiggs2020

Story Name: Fragile Eternity 
          Character Name: Nova Ashford
          Age at beginning:10(Story begins years before Twilight)
          Love interest: Esme Cullen
          species: Human at the start(Vampire later about 3 months before twilight begins so she's still in her Newborn phase during Twilight)
          Description:
          Years before Bella Swan ever sets foot in Forks, a chronically ill girl named Nova Ashford crosses paths with the Cullen family through countless hospital stays under the care of Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Living with numerous life-threatening medical conditions, Nova spends much of her childhood fighting simply to survive, yet her unwavering kindness and quiet strength leave an unforgettable impression on the compassionate Esme Cullen.
          
          What begins as a caring, almost maternal bond slowly deepens over the years into a profound and unexpected love as Nova reaches adulthood. Together, they face the joys and heartbreaks of a life limited by illness while navigating the events of the Twilight saga—from Bella’s arrival in Forks to the confrontation with the Volturi.
          
          As Nova’s failing body reaches its breaking point, the Cullens are forced to make an impossible choice: let the woman Esme loves slip away, or grant her an eternity she never thought she’d have.
          
          Ability: Sanctuary Pulse
          Gift type: Area effect
          When Nova feels protective, a subtle pulse radiates from her and makes a space feel safe. Humans relax, children stop crying, and bloodlust becomes easier to control.
          (This especially helps Jasper’s control unfortunately it doesn't help with her own Newborn years)
          Note: During the Events of Eclipse and the situation with Bree Tanner bree isn't killed and Nova & Esme actually adopt her.

Garydiggs2020

If it's not obvious the story goes through the entire saga from:
            Pre Twilight
            Twilight 
            New Moon
            Eclipse 
            & Breaking Dawn as well as the years after.
            Also a few changes and additions:
            During the events of eclipse when the volturi guard show up Nova actually says directly to Jane’s face. 
            
            “If you touch my daughter again I’ll tear you apart and burn the pieces myself & if you think I can’t handle a little pain from a child then you don’t know me at all now go have your Tantrum somewhere else princess.” 
            
            A change in her ability instead of Sanctuary Pulse can we make her ability:
            Pain Reflection.
            Clara can take a physical or mental sensation directed at her and reflect it back onto the person who caused it.
            The ability does not simply copy pain.
            It reverses the direction of the experience.
            If someone causes Clara pain, Clara can force them to experience the same sensation.
            Jane’s gift is the perfect example.
            Jane’s ability causes the victim to experience the illusion of unbearable pain.
            When Jane uses it on Clara, Clara can eventually turn that sensation back around.
            However, Clara’s ability has limitations.
            She must consciously understand the sensation being inflicted upon her.
            The more intense the pain, the longer it takes her to reflect it.
            And Clara’s ability is strongest when she is personally enduring the pain.
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Garydiggs2020

Yes to him being her descendants and for Charlie’s has a daughter also bella Occasionally slips into ancient languages when speaking and since she’s been alive for so long she’s not only met Alice and Rosalie but all the other Cullens as well but they don’t remember her very well she also has a collection of items from throughout history and 1 personal item for each Cullens human life that they thought they lost and has kept everything in pristine condition since given them.
          
          Sorry about making a second post but until Wattpad fixes their issues I can’t comment on an actual post but if it makes things easier on you I can send any future information on the Primordial Swan story through TikTok messages if that works better for you.

Brianna170402

@Garydiggs2020 okay. Sorry for asking so many questions for it. Have you seen The Old Guard? If so is that how you want Bella and her siblings to be? Immortal but can ‘die’ and be resurrected. It’s entirely up to you 
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Garydiggs2020

She does have siblings.
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Brianna170402

@Garydiggs2020 okay but I’m switching the roles. He’s going to be part of the Union army because Bella is going to join him. She stands for humanity and everyone should be treated equally. Also what did you think of her having siblings or you just want her to be alone
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Garydiggs2020

Story Name: Primordial Swan
          Character Name: Bella Swan
          Species: Primordial 
          Apparent Age:17 (Actual Age: Older than the Known universe)
          Intersex
          Mates: Rosalie Hale & Alice Cullen
          Timeline: Pre-Twilight- Breaking Dawn
          Description:
          What if Bella was never simply human what if she was there at the start of creation itself? Bella Swan has seen the rise & fall of every single empire since the dawn of time, ancient Egyptian-been there, done that, Ancient Greece- actually participated in it, and is the basis of the Greeks' belief in Mount Olympus, Ancient Rome- she was there for the crowning of the first Roman Emperor, she's seen it all. But all she wants is someone to call her own, so imagine her shock when fate gifts her with two different mates, Alice Cullen & Rosalie Hale, both of whom she met when they were still human.
          Ability: The Living Archive
          Bella remembers literally everything.
          Every language.
          Every civilization.
          Every face she’s ever seen.
          Every battle.
          Every invention.
          Nothing is forgotten.
          She can even allow someone else to experience those memories firsthand.
          Imagine Edward or Aro reading Bella’s mind…
          …and instead of hearing seventeen years…
          They experiences 13.8 billion years all at once.
          He immediately collapses.
          Carlisle later says Edward’s brain essentially tried to process eternity.

Brianna170402

@Garydiggs2020 i like it. Did you want Bella to have siblings like her? Kinda like the movie Eternals. And did you want Bella to have kids and Charlie be her descendant and he has a daughter named Elizabeth who’s going to end up with Edward. Her descendants won’t have powers like her because she chose for them to be human so they can live their lives to the fullest. 
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Garydiggs2020

@Brianna170402 in response to your last question on The Story idea/request “the Crimson Eternity” it’s girlxgirl I am having trouble replying on the conversation thread itself so figured I would answer your question here.

Brianna170402

@Garydiggs2020 Okay. No worries it’s been glitching for me a bit too
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Garydiggs2020

Story name: Crimson Eternity 
          Character Name: Feyre Swan (Pronounced Feyra)
          Sibling: Bella swan
          Age: 17-18
          Love interest: Esme Cullen
          Description:
          In the misty town of Forks, 17-year-old Eileen Swan’s life changes when she meets Esme Cullen, a mysterious woman bound by immortality. Drawn into Esme’s world of secrets and danger, Eileen discovers a forbidden love that transcends time but comes with deadly risks. As they navigate the divide between mortal and immortal, Eileen must decide if their love is worth sacrificing her humanity, or if eternity is too high a price to pay.
          Has a parent/child bond with Rosalie.
          Side note: Charlie Swan already knows about Vampires being a Supernatural creature himself.     His Species: Hellhound, an ancient guardian whose instincts are to protect humanity and maintain peace between supernatural factions. This explains why he already knows about vampires and why even dangerous beings think twice before crossing him.
          Ability: Harmonic Resonance 
          Everything in existence has its own “frequency.”
          Feyre can sense and harmonize these frequencies.
          She can:
          * Calm a raging vampire by stabilizing their inner resonance.
          * Strengthen allies by bringing their body and mind into perfect harmony.
          * Detect lies because deception creates a discordant resonance.
          * Find hidden objects or people by recognizing their unique “signature.”
          * Disrupt an opponent’s balance without causing lasting harm.
          As a vampire, this gift evolves dramatically. She can harmonize entire groups, allowing the Cullen family to fight with near-perfect coordination, or create waves of discord that make enemies lose focus and coordination.
          (Timeline: PreTwilight- To Breaking Dawn)

Brianna170402

@Garydiggs2020 okay sounds. Also it’s girlxgirl or do you want her to be intersex?
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Garydiggs2020

She does Have a few supernatural traits as a human but the full transformation doesn’t happen until she’s bitten think of it like instead of her becoming a Cold one when bitten by James the Hellhound aspect activates fully as a defense mechanism capable of burning off the venom but it cannot be stopped once it’s begun.
            She would be friends with the pack sometimes even shifting into her Hellhound form to Help with patrols but not being an actual member of the pack.
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Brianna170402

@Garydiggs2020 *you know* sorry misspelled it 
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shaybitan

Hi 
          How are you 
          Are you going to update Kiss me, Haven sent my angel, Eternal Love and The thrill of the chase soon?

Brianna170402

@shaybitan yes I am. Not this week but next week for sure. 
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shaybitan

And Fire N Gold
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