@AstroXSix13 Honestly, my lemons are not. Good. At. All. I’m re doing them cause hell no reading old work is awful but for advice, I would have something in the lemon that seems different and something new (not sure how to explain it) or really zoom in on key moments like before the actual sex scene. It depends what kind of lemon, like who’s in control, if they’re both in control. Also, I refuse to write “member” again, the word doesn’t bother me as much but sometimes reading it I’m like “bro just write the word dick”. Not sure if this was helpful but I’m writing this at almost midnight lmao, hope if ur writing it goes well and merry Christmas
