Hello there,
I just came by to say that I like your story.
I dont know if you are still active or you have forgotten about this but anyway i like your story and I like to know how it will unfold.
I know it rude but your story have potentials that you may have overlook. They are still have problems and very raw but if you polishes and cater them, it maybe a fine piece of art that even you maybe surprise.
Dont get discourage easily and continue on pursue on what you love because you will never know your limits until you try with all your hearth and mind into it.
Your story, your style, other people have no right to intervene with it. You choose for yourself. The problems in your story is normal because nobody reach the top without falling first. Live your life and have fun.
You are an author, the world you created is limited only to you.
Anyway enough rambling, Have a good day and good luck.
P.S. Im very sorry if i said anythings wrongs. If you have anythings to talk about with me you can PM me and maybe we can chat.
Bye
