Hi hun! I’m all caught up w/ your book, & I really like it! I really like the story development between Drake & Egypt. It’s not rushed at all which is perfect. Most times I find that the “hero” is already sweeping the main character of their feet by chapter 3 in stories like these, so it’s refreshing to see something different. Continue to show us their characters outside of their worlds colliding.
The only constructive feedback I have is the character development of Jordan & his relationship w/ Egypt. Right now, the story is pacing like something traumatic (cheating, physical abuse, etc) is going to happen to break them up, & I don’t think that has to be the case at all. I would love to see Egypt end things on her terms & not his or his wrong doing.
So far, so good! I’m excited for your next update
