BrittanyC

Published A prologue and chapter 1 of a new book I'm working on. If I could some thought on it that'd be great!

Anybody else read Love is suppose to be messy cause I cant find it and it disappeared from my favorites 

How is everyone?

Evil, all I see is Angelina Jolie. 
          Glen Close as Cruella Deville 
          Susan Suranden as Mommy dearest 
          And I know there's many more that fit the list, but to just get you started, cause I don't know exactly the type of evil you want.....

Taking suggestions for famous females as a villain

Questions about WHY is this woman there disrupting their Marriage, when nothing ever happened between this teacher and her, but she could be saying it to Mrs V?? But isn't she a little late IF she was Married to the abusive jerk?? So why show up when she's happy? 

No, thanks, I just noticed this was book 1, phew here I come  book 2!! :)

And that's where you leave it? Um, obviously there was time to set up the Marriage, so WHY didn't Miss H make a bigger scene before now?? And I have so many questions that I DON'T know where to start, but obviously I NEED more, but no??

Ok Brittany, As you see I'm 
          An editor, and the first time I saw this I thought it's not that bad, and then I noticed it at the end of the chapter, so now it's bugging me! The first time you were describing about intertwining are hands, and that's the WRONG word for describing this, are IS the word for describing a thing that is out there,  but when your taking about what's happening between two people it needs to be OUR, so intertwining our hands, laying our foreheads together is how it needs to be said!!I'm interested otherwise,  so good luck with the rest!!

Hey Brittany, I was just adding your stories according to the numbers, and then I noticed that there was a couple of other stories that had numbers,  so could I possibly get the different stories in the order of which story it belongs to?? Thanks, @Misty2Dorothea & @Misty4Mark