Honestly I found you rather rude. First of all you didn’t even have the guts to reply when I simply just asked for feedback. And secondly, I know that there isn’t anything wrong with my story. If it’s not your type of story, that’s too bad. But that’s all you had to say, but really you didn’t have to say anything at all. But saying my stuff is horribly written and confusing? You can tell that to the 20,000+ people reading my story. But if writing was easy you would be doing it right? ;)