Brokenstone

Hiii!How are you?I hope fine!
          I'm sorry for bothering you, but do you have time to check out my stories? 
          my biggest dream is to become a great author one day!
          If you are interested, here it is.
          
          
          
          I follow back too for help you because I know it's not easy to be a writer ;)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/328523548?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_IKnowEnglish_&wp_originator=pWCJmQ%2B3QjtyjxeeB4Rzrhg1Nycidk699DwUiOF3aMKbcfZlPxwhlPYlJxtSCMR5WNHV%2BahDnGBr8Tnt8WEgRq%2FstUUcTnj5KbYjuq8ixRA9FkWLpf%2BX%2B%2Bc9HrcCqxFP

Hey, I started reading your book and honestly not very bad. However, the story is a bit too fast paced. It's kinda a flaw because the emotional impacts and thrilling action sequence don't land as deep as it should. 
          
          Overall, I'll give this story a solid 7.5/10, because you genuinely have a good premise and engaging characters. I'd like to see more of your work fr. 

Hi, I posted a new chapter, Ok bye Love you guys.
          Chapter-15

Hi, I posted a new chapter, Ok bye Love you guys. Chapter-14

Hi I Posted New chapter ok bye Love you

Hi, I posted a new chapter, Ok bye Love you guys.

Thanks for following up with me I would be glad to read your book and you can read my book Naima.

In your book I have one small question. When the stone glows, does that mean they're chosen or not. 

I'm writing my first book. I would like you to read it. If you do, I'll truly appreciate it. It would mean so much to me. If you do read it I would love to know what you think about it. If you do want to read it its called the fall down. I also am gonna read your book and let you know what I think about it

Hi,I apologise for writing in your conversation box. 
          I've written a story and would like to know your opinion. If you like it then please support. 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/397340622?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Kookie_World0518