Brookbb95

Sorry about the lateness of this chapter but had a - small touch of writers block

Deadmansouls

Brother can you please do one piece fanficion and next chapter of naruto please

Brookbb95

@DebojitChetia DM me and we can talk about that
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Deadmansouls

@DebojitChetia no new op luffy x harem fanfiction please 
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Brookbb95

And by one piece do mean change of fate
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Brookbb95

 Maybe people get tired of hearing this but, I'm still a little bit disappointed that nobody comments on the story is that I create. I really do appreciate all of the votes and follows.
          
          But I need to know people's thoughts, I need to do what you like and dislike about the story so that I can improve as a writer and give you an even more captivating story.

kakashioftheleaf

@Brookbb95 your story is great
            I think you should give Naruto a special summoning animal
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AnnaDurai4

@Brookbb95 
            Bro you are doing great!!!!!
            I love you naruto book
            Very much!!!!!!
            It's one of the best naruto books i have read!!!!! and there
            are not so many fem haku fanfic and you are doing great bro keep it up!!!!
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BenjaminDuplantis

Hey loving the naruto story, and i see you comment about reader not commenting, but it’s hard when story so captivating but anyways loving it :3

Brookbb95

I feel like they are going to treat each other like sisters
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Brookbb95

@BenjaminDuplantis as for being on equal level I would think that they were
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Brookbb95

@BenjaminDuplantis this is something I am well aware of it will be fixed in future chapters
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Brookbb95

I'm still perplexed as to why no one ever comments anymore. Votes and follows are always appreciated, but I would really like some comments so I can get into the heads of my readers.
          
          I would love to see all of your comments, your likes and dislikes about how the story is going. Predictions on what you think will happen next even some creative criticism would be appreciated.

Brookbb95

@Brookbb95 I will even take your ideas and incorporate them into the story if I like them enough
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Brookbb95

I appreciate all of the followers and and votes that I get but a comment or two here and there would be nice

KyleRees234

@Brookbb95 just found your naruto fanfic so will be writing on here more :)
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