I know I don't have very many followers, but for the few of you reading this, I hope you'll answer.
I've had this idea for a story I wanna do. Problem is, I'm having a hard time putting it together. I've tried a few times now to write it out piece by piece and post it, but it just never seems good enough to me. The story is called Chipped and it is a future set dystopian world. Set in the 4,000's, a group of rebellious teens are taken by the government and used to experiment a new microchip GPS. The chip shocks anyone who tries to leave the border surrounding their "nation". A royal family has declared and achieved world domination and has set very strict laws, leaving what is formerly known as America separated into "nations".
I know, its alot going on for one story, but I think if I can get it sorted out, it can be really good. My question is, would anyone be willing to be like a proof reader for me and help make adjustments as needed? I'd welcome any input and give credit of course, I just really wanna put this out there.
