Busy Bee

This is my review on your story titled 'Hey Kitten (BXB)' or something along the lines of that.
          Firstly, there were a lot of grammatical errors in this story. Both little and big words were spelt incorrectly.
          Secondly, there are quite a few sentences that were not used rightly or appropriately. 
          
          Thirdly, some of the sentences in this story lacked proper arrangement or organization. Some needed more spaces, lines, or paragraphs and some others didn't.
          
          Fourthly, some parts of the story were so boring and totally not needed or unnecessary.
          
          Sixth, a few parts of this story contain or shows unintentional low intelligence.
          
          Note: all these can deter a person from fully grasping or understanding the true intent of the story.
          P.S : not everyone may notice all these unless they were really paying attention or following the story lines steadily. This is just my opinion.

Hi!

Hi Hi hello!
          Your girl is alive and okay-ish?
          I really want to apologize for the fact that I'm so on and off for posting. I get so much motivation and then none. like a reallllll bad case of writer's block yk?
          
          Also, I just recently got diagnosed with rheumatoid arthritis and it sucks. There are days when I can't even move my fingers because of the swelling and pain. I just got put on some meds and I'm probably gonna start physical therapy soon so hopefully, I can start using my hands normally and my bones stop hurting.
          
          Thank you for still reading my cringy stories doe, I'll keep you guys updated on anything that happens soon.
          
          Love yall!

Hi Hi
          I am also upset because I already had chapter 8 half way done for My Lone Wolf but my computer died and Wattpad for some reason didn’t freakin save it and I cant find it in any of the previous revisions 

Hi Hi Hello
           I am alive but dead
           I got my second dose of Covid on Friday and I literally had to call out of work Saturday. 
          I was dyinnnnggggggg but I feel better now and good to go.
          Even though it felt as if I was hit by a bus I still recommend getting ur vaccine !!!!! Stay Safe <3

Hi hi hello!!
          
          So this week i got one of my molars extracted and a bone graph done so your girl is on medicationnnnnnnnnn, I’ve been feeling nothing be uncomfort and nausea so i may or may not be able to upload a chapter tomorrow.
          
          I thought id have it done but i havent been able to work on it cause of how weak i feel so im sorry but ill have something up next week i promise!!!
          

Hi hi hellllloooo! If you haven’t noticed I’ll be posting a new chapter for my new story My Lone Wolf every Friday! Around 10 pm pacific time, make sure to check it out !!! 
          
          I hope y’all have been staying safe throughout these time, love ya !!

Please updated Finally (boyxboy)

Hi. I love ur novel hello kitten. Wishing you a merry Christmas

Hi, we'd be so thankful if you check out our story and give your opinion on it. It's not finished yet so we'll appreciate it so much if you keep following the storyline. Thanks! Have an amazing day! 
          Amonet ⭐