BrushShogun93

Just made some edits to chapter one of Scary Love & Small Wonders. Added a little more dialogue between Tristan and Rowan and made their conversation a little more casual.

AaronWilliams544

Dragon ball Alternative what is the difference this and the show

BrushShogun93

@AaronWilliams544 thanks for asking. So in the beginning there's not much of a difference and you won't really notice it until  they meet Yamcha which should be in the next chapter. Since I've seen most the anime and movies it'll include small hints to characters who probably weren't thought of yet but technically existed in this point in time. Also I'm changing the personality and reasoning some characters had of doing things that didn't really make sense, or maybe don't make sense in today's standards. (Ex. A 16 year old having a loaded gun, or looking for magical balls to literally wish for a bf) 
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BrushShogun93

So I decided to re-publish my story. I had delete the old one cuz I didn't like how I wrote it. Many people read the last one, hopefully they come back and read this one. I only have the prologue ready for now but will be publishing chapter one part one soon. And part too will fallow hopefully right away.