Bstarroyer

This it just my third ever book and I’m still exploring what I like to write. I do also like reading mystery’s and thrillers and Carlos past sort of intrigued me. This was a very fun book to plot, but I’ve learned I don’t really like writing crime thrillers. After this I think I’ll go back to contemporary romance and finish writing Charlie’s love story. I’m also slowly working on getting Fate Interrupted ready to publish on Amazon etc mostly just so I can have a hard copy for myself. 

@Bstarroyer hi. Sorry to hear you are dealing with health issues. I also studied abroad in the heart of London when I was 20, it was a great experience for me, I hope hers is as well. 
            Gio really isn’t connected to the mafia. His dad’s family is very wealthy (Gio’s grandfather was the CEO of a bank, I’m thinking maybe he pulled some strings for Santino at some point but not really connected to him in anyway other than maybe some shady business dealings.) Carlo just found out about Santinos casino unfortunately while manic and made a big mistake. So to answer your question, the end of FI is the same. Carlo paid for the house Gio and Ren live in California in the epilogue and he splits his time between there and Italy. 

I’m so happy you noticed! I have some health challenges which have slowed me down. The latest is CODP which is really hard. I’m almost 69 so I have to expect challenges. My only granddaughter is a gen Z and I must say that I have found it really hard communicating with her and don’t get me started with the cell phone and social media. She has always been a very good student without much effort. She graduated this year from high school and our local community college. She accepted an offer from UVA and will be starting in the fall. She applied for a special class in London for her first semester at UVA. Her first time outside the US will be to London. I think she will be attending Regent University in the heart of London. So it’s been a busy summer just trying to get her ready to leave. I noticed a difference in your writing for this book. I’ve always been a fan of Gio and Ren but this story just isn’t clicking for me as much. I think part of the issue is the missing introduction of Gio Italian Mafia family and the lack of connection prior to this point. I loved your ending to book 2 and I’m going look back and see if you changed it. Btw, I think the gen X believe the world needs to adapt to them! So I’ll leave Gen X to you to write about because I could not do it. 

@Bstarroyer I love that!

What led you to me? I’m just a bit curious. 
            
            I actually do quite a bit of due diligence on an author before I make a decision to download and read. For example I know your about is very weak on Wattpad. All I basically know is that you joined 6 years ago. You don’t say anything about yourself and where you are from. I did check out your instagram but I didn’t notice many ads for your books, just plenty of food. I guess I’m to assume you are from Perhaps India. I’m American and have never ventured outside the US. Therefore sometimes I have difficulty with cultural and language differences. I do comment on stories as I read to be helpful to the author. I just finished a book from an author in India. I must say it’s one of the best books I’ve read on Wattpad. I forgave the grammatical errors since the story was so good. The title is The Mafias Pure Desires. 
            
            Currently I have at least 20 books to get through. I took a couple weeks off from reading. And I just recently finished All the Colors of the Dark by Richard Whitaker and on the 2024 New York Best Sellers top 10 books. It is an excellent book. It takes place in the US from the time period of Jimmy Carter and forward. I’ll add Mafia Heirs #1 to my reading list. 

@Bstarroyer Hi sweetie. I'm sorry for the late reply, I didn't see this until just now. Okay, my first priority is finishing this book my dear because this is a series so I must complete this one first to go on with the next one. And it has sixty chapters and I've published 45 up to now and so there are 15 chapters to go.
            My updating schedule is every Friday but if it happened that I couldn't publish(which I usually inform my readers beforehand), then I do double update to make it up.
            And about the month gap, as human I was going through some issue and I had to take to a break to take care of it. But I shared it with my readers and they were very supportive. Rest assured, I'm now updating regularly.
            About story description, well, haha. I'll be honest, I'm not good with these decriptions(Not matter how hard I try:() but I promise you the book is way better than the description. You can give it a chance and see it for yourself dear.
            I hope I have cleared all your doubts babes.
            Have a nice time there❤

I always consider reading books by request however I also conduct some due diligence before I make my decision. New authors don’t always finish their books which tends to annoy me. I noticed that you have some gaps in your story updates. For example there was no update in May and June and July had two updates each. How many more chapters do you planned before the ending? Your story description is weak. If I read the description alone I seriously doubt I would be interested. 

I’m not a Sci-fi fan but I’m going to select one of your books and try to read. I’m a fan of Alix and her Russian Roulette Family Affair book.