Renny_1359
Hi! Hope you are doing fine. I have recently started reading 'Infinity'. The storyline and the theme you have chosen is all great. But there are lot of confusions as the story progresses. The powers keep on changing for each person and suddenly the MC's know of the people they have yet to meet. And also there are continuous repetitive lines and thoughts. The story is changing constantly with no solid line which is a lot more frustrating. And the story doesn't feel humane. It's like reading something the ai has created. The ai is good but letting it write and develop the story is a lot of frustration cause the ai always doesn't follow the plot and keeps on repeating the same lines, thoughts and dialogues, it also doesn't make us feel the story at all. If we write the story and letting ai correct the mistakes is fine but letting it write and develop doesn't workout in my opinion.
Nowadays a lot of stories being developed by ai, the plot and storyline are good but due to the writing, the interest to read is being lost and it's frustrating to read too. For a lot of us, stories are escape from reality and a kind of peace, but Nowadays even that is becoming increasingly scarce due to this ai developed ones.
Sorry for dumping all this on you but I just hope you to write this story personally cause I really like the idea, storyline and plot. If you write it, it would get the human touch and make the story much more interesting and makes us readers want to continue reading rather than drop it due to frustration. All the Best! And I hope you will keep on coming up with great stories.
Renny_1359
@Bts_is_lifeot7_stan Thank you for not misunderstanding me and taking this in a positive light. It has been difficult to give even constructive criticism to people so that they can develop more because they take it as negative criticism. So I was worried about that, but still with a lot of courage I typed it out because I have been thinking why no one is coming up with this type of storyline with BTS. Actually, I have a halfway-developed story that's similar to this theme but I don't have the courage to put it out. So when I finally came across this story that I have been hoping for, I wanted to enjoy it fully, so that took the tiny bit of courage in me and I wrote to you. I really am looking forward to how you are going to develop this story and enjoy it. All the Best!
Bts_is_lifeot7_stan
@Renny_1359 Hi, I get where you're coming from, I personally cringe at some of the things I wrote after rereading the story, and I have been doing some editing by hand, since originally this was supposed to be a hard copy for my English assignment and when I wrote the story it was during my exams, which I guess you can say caused me to forget some of the things I initially wrote. I was thinking of taking the story down so that I can edit the whole thing, hopefully I can do that soon and clear up the repeated dialogs and your not the first person to ask if this was Ai written so no worries, English is probably one of the only things I'm actually great at, so thank you for thoughts and I'll take it to consideration
Renny_1359
@Renny_1359 If it's not AI written, then I am sorry for the misunderstanding. And hope you keep on improving your writing. I a not a writer but I am an avid reader and enjoy multiple versions and themes. I hope you take this with positive light. And sorry if it's rude or disrespectful. All I hope is to ready the story while enjoying it and immersed in it and want to know how the plot goes but I can't seem to continue it due to a lot confusing things in the story. But I hope I can read it again one day with your touch in it.
