BuNieBlu

Updated version of beyond the closet, called "the world beyond the closet". Better edited and plan on writing more. check it out if your new to the closeted world.

SparxsII

Hey there!! I love your story Half Human so far and I will defeintely finish reeading tommorow! XD  I was hoping that you could read my adventure novel PKY2 and tell mw what you think about it and how I could improve? I would appreciate it SOOO much! THANKS! :)

SparxsII

@SparxsII Oh... ok... 
            I don't know why you're telling me this but if you REALLY felt the need...
            Ok. 
            ._.
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larry-stylinson_

@SparxsII her stories are boring
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Warriors_Rewritten

Well that's the thing, I'm kinda what people would call as cruel.I don't think people would want to read about that!

BuNieBlu

@coolcats3263  use that to your advantage. write a book you would call depressing. there was a book called crank. it is depressing but I couldn't put the book down even if the only thing I did was cry. :3
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Warriors_Rewritten

Well you seem to write good books and I was wondering if you could give me a bite of writers advice so that my books turn out ok

BuNieBlu

@coolcats3263 really just compare the book you write to your life. fuel your emotions to the book. if your happy make your readers happy. if ur mad make a plot twist. so readers don't know what will happen....half the time I don't even know. you'll do great <3
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