Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if you could read one of my stori es and comment on it! (voting , fanning, and whatever are all optional, its the reviews I need!) I'd love to return the favor, and I will! 
          I know this might annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          
          Pride, Prestige, and The Undead-- When Aislinn LeBlanc went to boarding school, she expected to be working hard and standing out with her scholastic honors and economist talents in a sea of high-society spoiled brats in their opulent playground. Little did the senator's daughter know, however, that she was entering a world where your rich and famous can kill, slaughter, and hack things like no one's business.African mythology, action, and secrets of success all come together in this tale of zombieslaying and prestige. 
          
          Empire Wars-- Drug-dealing in a small town in Iowa wasn't all that great, and life was quite boring for a certain young cynic--until, that is, when Kiers and his friends are offered to risk life and mind to test a new breakthrough "video game." Empire Wars was designed to be the most difficult game in the world, where dying is just too easy; but it isn't as if his own morbid mind and his friends' own "personality problems" don't come in handy. Join this band or neurotic, psychotic miscreants of society, and let them shamelessly steal your sanity! 
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!

youkilledmejason

would you plase read my story??? 
          
          
          There's more than meets the eye with Asher Foxx. From one glance, you can tell he has a very tragic history, one he keeps bottled up inside him. And he does. In Asher's story, you'll feel everything he feels; the pain, the compassion, the hurt, the betrayal, the hatred.... and most of all, the slowly rising love for a girl he meets. But he stays away to protect her, protect her from the things that haunt him to this day, while he forever fights away a disease inflicted on his brain. She is confused and wonders why he goes to great lengths to avoid her. 
          
          But it's because Asher could never let what happened to his old flame (currently and forever extinguished) happen to her...

maryasha

Boo! lol, i recently wrote two new stories and would love to get some constructive criticism. Let me know what you think of them :]
          
          MR. HOLIER THAN THOU
          Synopsis:
          He has a twisted sense of humor and he hates my hair colour. He feeds me chokoberries just so he can kiss me and taste them from my mouth.
          The bastard is my Master.
          Alston. The atrocious Fae.
          She has the ugliest hair he has ever seen and does not appreciate his amazing sense of humor. She loses her temper and her sharp tongue can outrun any Fae he has ever known.
          The urchin is my servant.
          Méav. The raven haired ecce.
          http://www.wattpad.com/271532-mr-holier-than-thou
          Quick Fact: Over 80% of the ppl who read the Chapter 1 continue on to read Chapter 2.
          Which % are you?
          
          SHATTERED HEARTS
          Synopsis:
          Life is an empty shell if there is no one there beside you to share it with. Celest knows that all too well. After overhearing her fiancé making love with her step-sister, she shatters. Her quiet reserve is pushed aside to let out a torrent of emotions that have been boiling for the past years.
          In an attempt to distance herself from all those who belittle her, she decides to take a long trip to South America. She finds herself taking a flight to Margarita Island with one other lone passenger on the plane.
          Too bad life doesn’t always work out as planned.
          http://www.wattpad.com/310538-shattered-hearts