Hi, dear. I read your story: "A Psychopath's Heart."
Actually, to be honest, I didn't like it too much. I'm not saying this to bring you down or anything, but I'm saying this because I believe your story can be so much better. I mean, you need more descriptions—about appearance, emotions, and surroundings—and you need to tell us more about the main character: Freya. I honestly didn't even know her name was Freya until later in other chapters. I even know more about Archer than her.
There are many other things to work on, and I'd be glad to help you out, even elaborate!
By the way, I did not completely hate your story; I did learn some things from you. I learnt how you did a plot twist. (P.S: I'm in love with plot twists. ✨) You're not a terrible writer, and neither am I. You're not a perfect writer, and neither am I. The only thing we can do is just get better, no? :)