Sresth19
Hi
I just read your 'The Other World' story. While reading I found a small mistake. There was a line in second part of the story, it was ' don't eat while eating'. I guess you wanted to write 'talk'. I just wanted you to know about your mistake so I didn't wrote it in the comments section. I hope you will continue writing this story. Oohh.. and Sorry if you felt bad that I picked out a mistake.
Bumblex_Bee
oh! Thank you so much for bringing it to my attention! I didn’t even notice! I appreciate it very much! Thank you!