I like the story-
Well, here some tips you asked for ^^
1. When writing a story, i always focus on the details. And making phrases longer, what can help understanding the storyline. Details are for me very important, cause without them, my story would be really short.
2. Make chapters longer, there’s no limit of words tho. My chapters are like, 2000-2500 words. When you make them long, people have too come into the ‘read mood’, to continue reading, otherwise they get bored.
3. End a chapter with a ‘cliffhanger’. Like, when something special or weirds happens, you could make a cliffhanger on there, so you’re readers are going to be (more) interested in the whole story (If they weren’t before tho). Like in mine, i literally end with the last phrase- TvT
But still, it make people curious, and getting excitement to read you’re next published chapter.
4. Let you’re story make sense. If you make a story with no sense, it’s not going to be really well liked.
5. Give some information about you’re characters, like how they look like, what they like and who they like (and not). In some, like, real advanced books, and stuff.
Like in Harry Pottah- You can just, start the story, but, the story has to be understandable from when you jump in it. And you should give much information about what you’re personage is doing, thinking, saying and wanting.
I hope these tips are useful for you, and i would love to help you with you’re story!
If you wanna know anything, dm me! ♥️