@BungaZ1004
Bab baru udh muncul yok buruan baca
I just published " bagian 10 " of my story " Obsessive & Posessive Lucius ". https://www.wattpad.com/1348752450?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=FgNpBSruGZd%2Bs6GEVp2fRc%2Bmmu8X4wR24QmxRQc%2BRIoFm%2Fxv%2FKOMxG8xzLlcFPvmd71qp90fUM6lQlUNbn4v6wNn3yFAMCM0qH8sTf43u539fgoeL%2BmDKstCW2ggDhz%2B
Halo Thor, cerita kamu bagus bgt, tapi aku harap di revisi lagi ya Thor, karena penempatan titik, koma, tanda petik masih salah, dan ada tulisan yg harus tidak di miringkan. Terus juga masih ada kata yang disingkat, seperti lgsg, yg, kw, dan lain lain. Aku begini karena mau aurhor jadi penulis yg sukses, aku bakal tunggu cerita cerita selanjutnya
@ diazarinfarah iya aku bakalan semangat, hehe maafin juga ya, memang banyak sih penempatan kata yang kurang tepat, aku mau revisi ulang kalo pembaca nya udah banyak+udah siap ujian, saya besok ujian do'ain juga ya, mau naik ke jenjang yg lebih tinggi yaitu SMA, do'ain biar lulus juga yaa☺kapan2 saya bakalan revisi nih cerita biar makin bagus , makasih atas sarannya
Bab baru sudah muncul jgn lupa dibaca
I just published " bagian 9 " of my story " Obsessive & Posessive Lucius ". https://www.wattpad.com/1338353851?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=Qn2%2BUT7fHlL3IJ3jyXdxhocXBinLIWHtUe178ZE4Bu4YJJGfOYzIxXlslPtWBL751f7tMGUQtNL798p0BzwsJaBbqji%2B%2BbTdB4wakXWiqZyvR4m9wTCPqinoqP%2FS0A%2Bi
Cerita baru sya jangan lupa di baca
I just published " PENGENALAN TOKOH " of my story " Crazy love & obsession ". https://www.wattpad.com/1333974389?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=0g3d8J5jSojRS6k3qgyRfpzjdzoCx6USEsMbeAXDtDXUf7WC7aOVtTryExtydFd%2FKJF%2B6VHaJ%2B%2Bb4WQFxGRc6BtQJGnSPhD4Y%2BFe9XcrE30%2BSjKJSAAoBvxOgzq6h2Mr
https://www.wattpad.com/1326029123?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=R320JVoIgZeVqE9IR65FwFsu8t9O5hLwJET3Kw0KaMvkK1flSsyIwacSo0yS5IO17bInZdFLlXdOBETEhhpl2f0B2dtEG7qLwyfThs%2Fr2xBWXUCTYqzD0az5aYXxqrtP I just published " bagian 8 " of my story " Obsessive & Posessive Lucius ". https://www.wattpad.com/1326029123?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=TxYDvU3SyQOnkjRPXnoz%2FucbGna22XM99Tph2dAo2PCoz3cn%2Fyc2TD6heBJo6Rrp80mQPMK36QXSRp4HNngbuhg8rdRZPO5SnQIcxIKoKt2z5nV0vOWL%2FF70TfTQuj0x
https://www.wattpad.com/1324785746?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=8t5lacNYQkCcg6zelz9i%2BtkTuCdsv7Nt%2FeT5HlLFNdpYc5f%2BmwTJ0IiZQBamSPVT9bai3No7gOFQR1pqoGMEbG2lN3smtCf1%2Fj30l%2BHg19RUvVsBt4UEStx2E6pKWqKU I just published " bagian 7 " of my story " Forever Mine! ". https://www.wattpad.com/1324785746?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=vnN379jXqZ6pgBnkVhM6Q60ABPrQcUqFxrgDEkQyG2Y6GGW8wbT57nsRXHzIcqvGt9zrTdswM%2FAWvoU1CYlJvABmqHeVhLTYNnagsv4ScyNb5PtqsXyieZIdZu5IXA3L
Jgn lupa baca
Saya baru saja memublikasikan " bagian 4 " dari cerita saya " Forever Mine! ". https://www.wattpad.com/1300488435?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=bYVG7HlP7QdHQ5y9EVfpvvE1FadX4Sts0WqQ5HZ46TuVsD2DAjoEaD2RFhIvs0nrJO1ul%2FvYh%2BD%2FEU0B5fq9FTqA4BQASPwmJmo3cxjYmGmRJrqLMIBZQ22VwoWJZB8U
Bab baru telah muncul
Saya baru saja memublikasikan " bagian 3 " dari cerita saya " My Forever Mine! ". https://www.wattpad.com/1300010044?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=BungaZ1004&wp_originator=uGSHOGDVwE5%2Bzl7qzaoFSl0oGdYBtRksz60mPz%2F%2FUiP4NIcIrjGLA2NZELEzt%2FM3GIPYbDnNs7oO2g1NyIZK44AJ5BWg8JKuEghDK0a03%2BAI%2B5S5a1U3wfZ4rnFow7S4
Hy guys baca cerita bru aku ya><
https://www.wattpad.com/story/329984126