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@BunnieJoy016 nothing much but I did release more chapters in minecraft horror mode you should check them out because it's spooky season!

@HenryValencia4569 I've been really good, still busy with school and extracurriculars, but honestly I wouldn't have it any other way. Hbu?

@HenryValencia4569 aww thanks for worrying, but I'm all good with my schedule, I like to stay busy. I have very little patience lol, so I get bored out of my mind if my friends are busy and I have nothing to do

@BunnieJoy016 I mean it's good to get yourself active but what concerns me is about you getting no breaks you made it sound like you don't have breaks

@HenryValencia4569 Idk tbh. My school year started up last week so now I have an hour of homework every night when I'm lucky and don't have a project or quiz. I also play sports and work out 3x a week so writing gets pushed back quite a lot, sorry ;-; I'll try to finish the next one by the end of the month

@BunnieJoy016 For me the minecraft trailer is a disappointment for me. I've been waiting for the movie to release just to be disappointed. And it's a disgrace to the eyes of some minecraft players. I mean if you want to get more players to play the game animation is where you're looking for. Since it increases the feeling of magical and creativity in your world.

@HenryValencia4569 honestly, I feel like it's an offense to the minecraft community. I loved MCSM, but it was kinda it's own thing compared to actual minecraft. I just feel like a movie based off a video game where you're supposed to be able to create and do whatever you want doesn't work unless you make it into something else, but it seems like they don't intend to do that.
            
            Sry lol hbu?

@BunnieJoy016 and also it would probably not attack him in certain biomes it rarely does show up in other biomes but often shows up in snowy biomes so Ivor is safe for now as long as he doesn't go to a snowy biome

@BunnieJoy016 the man in white is the merciful variant among the trio so if the man in white did get it's hands onto him his death would be rather quick

@HenryValencia4569 I'm guessing The Man In White would hate Ivor for unleashing the witherstorm which basically just eats the world and also for all his other actions in the future like his lava house lol

Turns out while I was digging turns out angry birds has scary music of their own you'll find out when I'm done with part three

@HenryValencia4569 Loved it! Getting real eerie vibes. It's sooo nice having another mcsm fan to get inspo from. Gave me motivation to finish my next chapter, so thanks! ;D

Also yes that's what I'm looking for

All I'm going to say is magnus will be surviving and also the slumbering omen can actually speak perfect English if you don't believe me I'll send you a video of the slumbering omen speaking

@HenryValencia4569 I would maybe give the main characters bursts of strength/ moments of weakness or dizziness depending on whether it's helping them in that moment and describe it as either like a burst of energy or that their limbs suddenly felt weak- is that what you were asking?

@HenryValencia4569 Just read it! Seems like a great start to draw in readers with a feeling of suspense. My only advice would be breaking up the paragraphs a bit more. I take my glasses off when reading later at night and smaller paragraphs just make it easier for my bad eyes to track what line I'm on. It also helps readers tell who's speaking when in sections with heavy dialogue. That's probably just my personal preference though