Bunny162

@alywillow is okay I need that I might just post the story I'm writing up now to get that second opinion now than you I really did need that

Bunny162

@alywillow can you read my book and tell me what you think
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alywillow

@Ayaome1 Your welcome. Can't wait to read it cause I definetly will!!!!! C:
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KuriTheElf

Hey bunbun! I'm sorry you enjoy one of my stories and it was one of them out on hold. I tend to do that alot and I'm sorry. ._. I have two stories that are finished if you wanna give those ones ago! And I'm working on a 3rd on to finish. When I find time to write. 
          
          Marionette and the blue demon -dabi
          
          Hawks and the butterfly -hawk's
          
          Bitter kisses and wolf bites -tamaki (one I'm trying to write on) 
          
          Hopefully this one's can keep you occupied until I can get back to the red ribbon.

KuriTheElf

Lol 
            Butterfly kisses and wolf bites not freak bitter stupid phone
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Bunny162

@alywillow is okay I need that I might just post the story I'm writing up now to get that second opinion now than you I really did need that

Bunny162

@alywillow can you read my book and tell me what you think
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alywillow

@Ayaome1 Your welcome. Can't wait to read it cause I definetly will!!!!! C:
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Bunny162

@alywillow thanks my my strong point but I'm trying to rise my story abilities now

alywillow

@Ayaome1 I doubt your as bad as you think considering most writers criticise their work and are harder on themselves then they are for other books they read. I've learned that posting stories on wattpad can help because you can ask for experienced writers to tell you what needs to be worked on and the things that are going right. Or you could just ask an english teacher or somebody who reads a lot for their opinion. A second pair of eyes is always helpful!! ....oki so you didn't ask for all of that....oops? :P
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