BunnyYagami

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BunnyYagami

After reading some of my book and seeing my writing progress I’ve decided I’ve decided to do some editing again, the first maybe 3 chapters. Maybe few bonus scenes, who knows. I’m adding a Prologue (Ik kinda late, but better than never ). Stay tuned!

urfavharrington_

Quick Question in your Maze runner story, when is the SA, and is there a trigger, and what's the severity, I'm just a little worried
          
          
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urfavharrington_

@BunnyYagami THIS. THIS PEOPLE IS WHY WE VOTE ON THIS GODDESSES STORIES. MK??
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BunnyYagami

Hi! It happens in the middle of chapter 8, the chapter title is rated r. My trigger warnings are all in the beginning of the book, and I also warn in my authors notes that chapter before it happens and right before the actual TW I will put TW and where it ends I will also make it know so that you can skip that portion
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being_mysterious4

Hey there just checking on how are you its been so long since u last updated can you please hint on how long will it take 
          I love this story so much yk ~♡~

BunnyYagami

 I’m okay! How are you? I’m so glad you are enjoying the story and I appreciate you sm <3 Funny story… I actually had the chapter written and set for a scheduled update but I guess wattpad decided to just.. delete it? (I don’t understand how) (: Unfortunately, I am currently out of the country and do not have access to my computer to be able to fix this wonderful issue. I should hopefully have the chapter out some time next weekend when I get back in town or even that following Monday. I’m so sorry about the wait ):
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Newt102938

got the first chapter of my book doun can you take a look i dount really know what im doing

BunnyYagami

It has a good start. I would suggest to take away the “I”.  For ex, instead of saying “ I wake up at 5:30. I get out of bed etc etc..” try doing “ the blaring sound of the alarm goes off at 5:30am. Letting out a deep breath, I lazily get out of bed and shuffle to the mirror. Messy strands of blonde hair fall down my frame as my blue eyes stare back at me.” It helps the story flow better. It’s something I struggled with a lot when I first started writing but reading it back and thinking of hoe it can sound more fluent and less harsh on the reader’s eye helps when it comes to writing/ editing.
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BunnyYagami

Sure!
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