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hi its been awhile since i updated my story just letting you know since your a fan i will be writing more very soon :) thx for adding my story to your reading list i appreciate it. tell people about it i need more readers/critics. Anyways thank you :)

@DancesWithTheDevil thank you so much!  :)))) 

Happy birthday!! :D

Hi, I just want to say thank you for your comment on my story 'Schizo'.  It really means a lot to me.

Sorry I took forever, but the critic is finally done! :D

Hi! My name is Gray. The title of my story is stay with me. I would please like you to check out the first two chapters and tell me what you think. This is my first book and I'm kinda insecure. Here is the link :  www.wattpad.com/story/14055560-stay-with-me

hello there :')

Hi everyone! I have only a a few critics last week and the reason for that was because two of uncles have sadly passed away (RIP) and it's been a emotional week. I haven't been home as well since we went to visit my uncles family and yeah. I'm sorry I havent done the critics yet, but now I am back and ready! I have 40+ people waiting for me to do their critics so please have patience! I promise I will do EVERY SINGLE ONE! Even if it takes a month or more :D Thank you :D

Hi. 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/46602285-mind-at-war
          
          If you could please critique this, it would mean the world to me.  I'm only of 13, so I especially do need the help in my writing areas.  I would also appreciate some suggestions, possibly? Of course, you do not have to do that, but I think it would surely help. 
          
          Thank you, it really does mean a lot. 
          
          :) x

Hello, are you open for critique? If so here is my story; Modern Vampire http://www.wattpad.com/story/10037270-modern-vampire