Milkiestman420

I’d like to thank you for officially creating the best system fanfic in all of history

Milkiestman420

@BurgerNoTomatoes just wanted to tell you something, are you aware that Rias is a weeb? Like a total japanophile, “wink wink nudge nudge”
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DantePendragon15

Hey Author-san! When is the next chapter of your Fate/RWBY story? Your stories are awesome! 

DantePendragon15

@DantePendragon15 Sweet! Looking forward to when you release it.
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BurgerNoTomatoes

@DantePendragon15 I appreciate it! 
            Honestly idk, it's really motivation dependent, I am pretty excited for the coming arc so pretty soon I'd presume
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DantePendragon15

Will there be a romance in your Fate/RWBY fan fiction? I just now found out this story existed I'm SUPER excited to read it as I'm a huge fan of RWBY and Fate, so that for creating this story. 

DantePendragon15

@DantePendragon15 That's fine, as long as he opens up bit by bit and sees there's more to his life when he has friends that care for him and the ice queen.
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BurgerNoTomatoes

@DantePendragon15 There will be, but given the MC it'll be a very late-game thing and a slow progressive one.
            The romance will be a very backburner type of thing and not the center of the Fic whatsoever.
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DantePendragon15

@DantePendragon15 Sorry *thanks lol stupid phone 
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RubenMartinez662

I got a Idea for the Three MuskeBRUZZAS. Yujis blood technique lets him control blood right but if you seen one pice when luffy uses second gear to speed up the blood flow in his body making him faster and stronger but mostly faster. Now what if yuji speeds up the blood flow using his cursed technique and there for re-creating second gear and I can see yuji using this technique thanks to all of those anime references he did in the anime when he was training. And thanks to reverse technique he can keep using second gear with no drawbacks.  And it will be pretty funny if yuji had pink skin while using the technique, and he’ll probably make a kirby reference or a majin buu reference who knows. 
          
          And if you end up using this Idea I got no problem just give me credit or not I really don’t care.

Shinji_is_him

@RubenMartinez662 that's just flowing red scale
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RobertQuasar

I’m thinking of writing my own ten shadows story very much like this one where the MC is reincarnated into the world of Danmachi as the younger brother of Mikoto Yamato. My MC would have a vastly different personality and goal compared to Akira. Also is it Ok with you if a borrow some of your Ideas for how the ten shadows works and rework them slightly, such as each shikigami having multiple stages and there being treasure bearers and treasure manifestations.
          
          Do you have any advice on how to properly outline the story because I have a good idea of how I want certain events to play out including when each shikigami should be tamed.
          
          Also could you let me know where I could research the sacred treasures that the ten shadows is based on. That would be a massive help.

BurgerNoTomatoes

@RobertQuasar Hey! Good luck with your story bro! Of course, feel free to borrow my ideas as you please my guy!
            
            As for research for the Sacred Treasures.
            The thing is... It's an issue I also had.
            Eventually, I only worked out the ones I managed to find and make an obscure connection to said treasure.
            There's an image on google you can check, simply write JJK Ten Shadows Treasures and you'll see what I mean.
            Based on those treasures, I bent the meaning that the ability Makes SENSE in the context of the treasure.
            Jeff Level 3 - Mirror Of The Deep.
            Rudolph - Jewel Of Resuscitation.
            Etc...
            
            Now, as for your question on outlining the story.
            I can't say I'm the best advisor on this, since I've seen much better writers have entire excel sheets with timelines, events etc...
            But I do have a basic method that is simple to follow and has worked out for me thus far:
            
            Have an outline of events that make logical sense that you WANT to happen in the future, for example:
            (1) Akira finishes Academy.
            (2) Akira sends info about Land Of Waves.
            (3) Due to this, Team 7 goes on Custom Mission with cascading events.
            
            It doesn't need to be something super concrete, you can build the plot as it goes.
            The important thing is setting up SEEDS to stir the story in the direction you want it to go.
            
            If you Don't do that, and an event that you want to happen can't logically happen  and you force it to happen despite not making sense... That's when you lost the plot.
            There were times I had to scrap events I planned due to them not making sense, which is why you need to take that into consideration, follow logic, the world and background plot and you'll be fine!
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Shinji_is_him

@BurgerNoTomatoes I have 2 really good fusion ideas for the ten shadows book
          1.rabbit escape+round deer+nue+divine dogs =Wendigo
          
          2. Round deer +rabbit escape=basically mini health packs or just a slow but constant healer to have in your pocket