BurgundyT3a

POV: You cringe at all your unfinished wacky stories and go through a whole persona change <3

SkysTheLimit084

Hey! If you have any feedback on my book I’d love to hear it! 

BurgundyT3a

Of course! I’ve actually finished judging your book a couple days ago :>
            
            The pacing of the book is very nicely done, giving me enough information and not confusing me. There are some spelling mistakes but other than that I don’t see many other grammar mistakes. Each oneshot is fun and intriguing and keeps me reading more. Your writing is a joy to read and judge, keep on doing whatcha doing ;>
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SkysTheLimit084

Hey! So I saw that ur judging my book for the muse awards. Idk if ur planning on reading all my one shots so here’s a couple of the good ones if u just want to read a few:
          
          1. Freedom- this one has mentions of torture and enslavement in it. Nothing graphic but idk if ur sensitive to that or not 
          2. Author 
          3. Prove it part 1 
           And maybe Not Built for Love.
          
          U can completely choose to ignore this and decide which ones u want to read I’m just saying these are the best ones imo. 

BurgundyT3a

Thank you for the suggestions! I’ll keep this in mind :>
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snowinfebruary

im from vietnam :DD

snowinfebruary

@snowinfebruary ive already read their stories, it's great :DD
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BurgundyT3a

Yayy! I read your about and my bestie @sleepythatkid also loves warrior cats and makes stories about them, so you could check them out too!
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