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Hey there,
          Would you please help review my book... No one's reading it and no feedback is killing me . Please  any sort of criticism or remark will help.
          
          It's called 'The Fault in our Scars'

HEYA! I’m an English author who likes to write adventurous-twisted-romantic/erotic novels ;)
          
          My first publication, ‘My Trophy Boy’, is a story about an erotic whirlwind between two bodies that walk through the reality of life. It takes a journey in life for the truths to be told. 
          
          Disclaimer! READ THE TAGS to ensure you know what you’re getting yourself into :)
          
          I would very much appreciate you sharing, commenting and voting on this novel for communal feedback purposes :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/255891617?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=bubblegum_space&wp_originator=aupuPl96%2Biz3OblFML2XXRc4b6rVR%2B7M8tjhpVYEbpMNNVU8wQy0OXARSqhqcHuBeqYrBXzqK49HMrtgQnvbAZRDFLJYPaUU6oV42bUOwxm4i9ktRX4xhoy%2B9%2FXJ5nVs

Hi 
          Can you please ask Ms Repunzel to update Home is with you pretty please  I don't mean any disrespect I just made an assumption since you guys seem pretty close ❤️