@Ultra_Instinct90000 I really love your story and there isn't much I think you need to improve besides trying to make longer chapters I know it will take longer but quality over quantity.
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@ManOfCultureIsHere Thanks for the feedback, if there's any Sperling mistakes or anything comment on the story, as of right now, I'm going to do my style before I get an editor but thank you for the offer!
@ManOfCultureIsHere no problem! I really like your story so far! I'n excited to see how it goes in the future, and if you ever need a cowriter/editer I can always help.