ButterflyQueen1685

@Anika_Ann_M Thanks! I look forward to reading and getting to know of your works. Thank for sharing them!

Thank you for taking the time to read the story, the consideration in your comments and your admiration. It really means everything that you are willing to give me a hand in critiquing my works. When I put anymore down,  I'll be more than happy to hear what you have to say ❤

@DesertRain83 Hey so I gave your Caught Unaware a read. It is definitely much fuller of action, I actually had a little bit of a hard time following. All the different POVs kind of threw me off because I guess I kind of like to immerse myself with the lead characters, it's just my way to sink into a story I suppose. It's a little harder to so when there are so many perspectives to look through. But it's not a bad thing at all the way you made your book. I can really tell that you put a lot of thought and effort into the story. You have so much significant details that's it's incredible and I can easily picture some of the scenes that you had described. I also like the sweet and fluffy moments between Amelia and John. They are so cute together. Your writing talent has shown through here as well. I do enjoy your work and look forward to any that you may be cooking up for the future. Thank you again for sharing your works. I really appreciate and admire your confidence and braveness to show the world your hard work like this.

@ButterflyQueen1685  I'm in tears over your comment, seriously. Thank you so much. I have heard others say they wish there was more to it too, I feel that way about a lot of my favorite authors and their stories as well :) if you have the time, and you are looking for another story to read that is along the same lines but kinda not, my story Caught Unaware is more than twice as long with a little more action and all the other silly stuff in it. It's not Jason Momoa-centered, proof that I'm not a one-trick pony  ;) , but it has so much more of my heart poured into it. Give the first couple of chapters a shot and let me know what you think. Someone as articulate as yourself is definitely someone I would cherish reviewing all my works ❤