Is there any chance I could offer you some help? I don’t know about editing, and I don’t know what the “UK” style is, but I would like to help any way I can. I know it’s up to you, I think it would be perfectly acceptable to post without running it through an editor first, or that’s what I do at least. Either way, I hope college for you goes well, and I hope you find time to write! Good luck!