stevenpepperoni11
Sooooo...
I added your story to my reading list..
But I don't know if I'll ever read it.
It doesn't have a description!
That about kills me!
How do I know what it's about?????
Exactly.
I don't.
So you might want to fix that.
You don't have to, though, just a suggestion.
CAD_DAC
I wrote that book when I had writers block and now I started a new one that I have truly thought out.... I love you criticism because it truly helped me write this one! and I am working on the description now :) please continue commenting and helping me improve upon my writing :D Thank you!