What can I tell you? I can't say anything about the literacy of your text. But I can comment on the content. 1. how do I understand this is the beginning of your novel? I don't really understand how the reader understood about Alf/bet/omega. Could you tell us a little about your wolf hierarchy specifically in your work? 2. How many wolves are there in your world, how many packs there are, and a little information about them. 3. there are a lot of such phrases In your story, such as" whore"," he radiated anger and power", and so on. Why does everyone treat the main character like this? Why does she want to run away? 4. As stroiny wolves? Do they have regeneration? And they can get drunk? What about ordinary people? The main character's father was a human?
