Royalty_Reserved

❝ I Had Closed off all avenues to Your grace,
          But then, I found myself at her doorstep, seeking solace and pace.
          And what an astonishment that You made her to heal and renew,
          So with gentle care, she led me back to You. ❞
          
          Salam! If you get time, check it out! You never know, you may find yourself adhering to it! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376182598?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Royalty_Reserved

imnothereanymore000

I’d love your input and advice on my new poem :)

CEJonesPoetry

I think it’s a great start to your journey!
            
            I personally don’t tend to enjoy this often but the repetition of “Shine on me again” is really good in this, feels like a desperate plea and you can really feel the emotion in it.
            
            It feels really raw and relatable and i love that it gives almost rhythmic feel with how well it flows, well done! i look forward to reading more! 
            
            (slight typo on the last stanza!)
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