Editors and Critics of Wattpad

Can you please edit my story, I thinks it needs a lot of touch up

Hey, please could you check out my story 
          
          'Keirra by Praizen'
          
          I'm just starting out, and I'll love to hear your critic view on the book. 
          Thanks 

Can you edit my story?

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