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@CHABI_CE sounds excellent! thank you

@Stormwolfwriters Hey love, tell u what? I'll check out you book though poetry is not my thing but i'll check it out and tell you what i think. If it's good you'll see with my votes but if it's not that good, I may have a few suggestions for improvement. that good? ;)

@amberlove222 I'm sure I will :)

@CHABI_CE Ah, thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the rest! xo

@amberlove222 Hi, so I checked out you book - I only read the prolong & I think I love it! I really mean it, it's a nice book - well written and it seems you know your literature. From the begining the book is so intriguing, it make you want to read on.
            
            I'm definitely going to add it to my library (that's a promise :) ). And to see whether I'm enjoying it or not, just keep a lookout for my votes - if I'm voting it means I'm loving it. I don't comment much so don't be suprised if I don't comment.

@hannah_zamri1509 Wow, OK I guess...

probably 

@hannah_zamri1509 Did you also think I'm a boy?

of course it's okay,why wouldn't it be

@hannah_zamri1509 I think it will make a good story, mit looks interesting so far...
            
            I also saw the character names & there's about 7 characters there, I would however suggest that you keep mainly to the main character most of the times so that it doesn't divert attention (like how the first part is written, no other characters interfering). the other characters can keep popping in every now and then but don't make them appear too much, but don't kill them completely. You know, like let them not be in each & every chapter, or even if they are the story shouldn't focus on them, the main concern are the main characters.  Okay I think I'm rambling now, so I hope this is okay :)

okay

yupe i did lol

@hannah_zamri1509 Haha, couldn't agree more, I'm sure u've noticed that's also the only genre I read;)

I hope your story has romance 'coz the story will be boring without it(in my opinion)

@Jmansfield3 Ah, No never. I could never write, I just suck at it...I'm just not that creative. But hey, I'm a heavy reader always have been, that counts for something right? :)

@MJ_Cristine Oh, it's a pleasure and I am enjoying the story so you can look forward to more votes to come :)

@asamuel224 lol it is ok I am like that too

@asamuel224 I will definitely do :)...sorry for disappearing yesterday, I got too busy & before I knew it time had fled :)

@asamuel224 fine thank you, if u like the chqpter I did a new one yesterday and be sure to read my message at the end :)