Stormwolfwriters

Please could you read and vote for my poetry book "Galaxies"?

Stormwolfwriters

@CHABI_CE sounds excellent! thank you
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CHABI_CE

@Stormwolfwriters Hey love, tell u what? I'll check out you book though poetry is not my thing but i'll check it out and tell you what i think. If it's good you'll see with my votes but if it's not that good, I may have a few suggestions for improvement. that good? ;)
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amberlove222

Hey babe! Mind checking out my book, Karma? It would mean so so much to me if you did! Thanks! xo

CHABI_CE

@amberlove222 I'm sure I will :)
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amberlove222

@CHABI_CE Ah, thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the rest! xo
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CHABI_CE

@amberlove222 Hi, so I checked out you book - I only read the prolong & I think I love it! I really mean it, it's a nice book - well written and it seems you know your literature. From the begining the book is so intriguing, it make you want to read on.
            
            I'm definitely going to add it to my library (that's a promise :) ). And to see whether I'm enjoying it or not, just keep a lookout for my votes - if I'm voting it means I'm loving it. I don't comment much so don't be suprised if I don't comment.
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hannah_zamri1509

thanks for the vote :)

CHABI_CE

@hannah_zamri1509 Wow, OK I guess...
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hannah_zamri1509

probably
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CHABI_CE

@hannah_zamri1509 Did you also think I'm a boy?
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CHABI_CE

@hannah_zamri1509 I think it will make a good story, mit looks interesting so far...
          
          I also saw the character names & there's about 7 characters there, I would however suggest that you keep mainly to the main character most of the times so that it doesn't divert attention (like how the first part is written, no other characters interfering). the other characters can keep popping in every now and then but don't make them appear too much, but don't kill them completely. You know, like let them not be in each & every chapter, or even if they are the story shouldn't focus on them, the main concern are the main characters.  Okay I think I'm rambling now, so I hope this is okay :)