CHASEBOII69

D11abc

@CHASEBOII69 bro they on bars now
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Enjoyer_of_music

Idk if you will see this, but here goes anyway:
          
          Hi. I am Enjoyer of Music. You can call me whatever you want I guess. Anyway,  I've read most of your stuff and really enjoyed it (one of four people who enjoyed whatsapp patrol lol). ANnyway, I think that you and I are not that different in our motivation to do this. I am working on a story called the Blue Factor (most similar to your story The Sky is Pink) and am probably going to do something of the dumb variety sometime soon. Anyway, really like your stuff, I think that we could do a really awesome collab. It might be hard (No discord) but it might be fun anyway. Just putting that out there. 
          P.S. If you want to see my attitude about this, to check out the authors note on the blue factor. Anyways, bye.

CHASEBOII69

One of the more common problems that I'm facing as a writer is that, while I can make decently good First Chapters, the second chapter is always the part where I screw up. And if you screw that up, you've effectively derailed the whole story.
          
          This is the problem that I'm facing with The Sky Is Pink. I've let myself down with that second chapter again. Although, and I rarely say this about my stories, I'm fairly satisfied with how Chapter 3 turned out.
          
          It's just that, if I learn how to improve the second chapters, I'll probably be able to make the story as good as I wanted it to be. That's just something I'm gonna have to learn to do in the future.
          
          Oh well, guess I'm still incompetent as a writer then eh?

Wolffe123

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@CHASEBOII69 you have summed up my problem so well. It all seems so promising in planning and fist little bit, then I fuck it up and the plot and any interest disintegrates
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TheOLPHA

@CHASEBOII69 i get this a lot tbh
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duckmakeslovetome

@CHASEBOII69 i liked the 2nd chapter. it was cute af
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