okay so i'm back kinda??? i've decided to unpublish retweet for a couple reasons.
1) in prewritten chapters i didn't publish, they dynamic between jeongin, hyunjin, chan, and felix got really really weird. in order to ease it back into more of a dynamic i liked, i would have to go back to the start basically and reconstruct their friendship.
2) similarly, the dynamic between seungmin and jeongin (i know they only had like one moment together but (; ) became way too romantic way too fast. however, i probably could have fixed this with out unpublishing, but it still sat weird with me.
3) felix's and changbin's relationship was WAAAAAAAAY too rushed. i don't expect this book to be 100+ parts, but i definitely should have taken more time with their relationship. their current pace has to be scrapped and rebuilt from not knowing each other.
4) felix's character development was too rushed. i'm not sure if i published these chapters or not, i honestly can't remember, but felix's face reveal to changbin and his mom kicking him out happened way too quickly.
5) the two major plot points that i have thought out aren't going to flow well with the current chaotic pace of the book. both of them require time, and considering i already rushed one of them, it would feel like i have to rush the other so the pace stays consistent. that would seem way too forced and honestly just mess up the plot even more.
so yeah retweet sucks and i really just wanted to start a book, but this kids is why we plan our books before we write them!