70EricaLanger
Hi, thanks for the follow!
CJ-Stone
brg319
Thank you for adding Shadowsnow to your reading list! I hope you enjoy it!
SilentSword1010
Hey, your book looks really interesting, and I’m glad you’re checking mine out as well! I was wondering why book 2 isn’t on here…..? Anyways, keep up the good work!
SilentSword1010
@CJ-Stone ……Ugh, right. It’s one of the many things I’ve got to work on, I suppose. Thanks for the suggestion, though! I’ll get to writing the last two(?) segments soon!
CJ-Stone
@SilentSword1010 I will be sure to do so! Yes, she has seemed pretty formidable so far! Except for the scene where she was captured and they took her blood, she hasn’t run into anyone that can give her a real challenge (although I have a ways to go). The only improvement I could see isn’t even a writing one (your writing is very strong) but a formatting one. At times you have multiple people speaking in the same paragraph, which can make it easy to mix up who is speaking. Perhaps using paragraph breaks and putting each speaker in his/her own paragraph would make for an easier read. I think that is how most novels are, but I’d need to check. Again, though, that is a formatting issue, not a writing one. Your writing is great.
CJ-Stone
That last link doesn't work with a period at the end, so try this one:
https://cjstone.substack.com
CJ-Stone
Hey everyone! Sorry for the radio silence. Two pieces of news:
- Book 1 of the Sapphire Angel saga is back on Wattpad after a brief absence!
- If you are looking for more, book 2, Power Play, is going live on Substack at https://cjstone.substack.com. Subscribe there to get it for free!
Thanks!
CJ
SteveWilliams064
Chapter 30 is the best you have written what a fight scene with beth
SteveWilliams064
Cj you are a brilliant writer and have created an amazing hero who is she based on and how can she fight so well especially the way she punches
CJ-Stone
Thanks! She did have some basic martial arts training, but it looks like most of her abilities are coming from the necklace.
CJ-Stone
I’m back to posting regular updates in my Sapphire Angel story over the past several days, continuing until done. We’re fast approaching the finale.
AllanWilliams7
What a brilliant story you have created who is she and the fight scenes are so realistic
CJ-Stone
Dipping my toe in with a story about a young woman trying to find herself in the midst of tragedy and change. https://www.wattpad.com/story/174313830
CJ-Stone
@ALLAN5313 I have the rest written and just need to get it posted. Thanks for the nice words!
