Hi. I just published chapter 5 of loyalty. I'd like to say a few things about it. I know my only followers are currently King, Feagain, and Rigly, but I'd still like to thank all 3 of you for helping me out with loyalty. Credit to those three for giving more characters (everyone except for wolf.) Anyway, credit to MostiWolf for making the book cover, I'm sure it took you a long time. Finally, thanks for letting me keep you in loyalty. I'd finally like to say sorry for a few things about loyalty chapter 5, and maybe the entire book. So, while making chapter 5, I realized that it focuses mostly on wolf, which isn't what I wanted. I wanted it to be evenly divided among all characters, but that didn't happen. I didn't want wolf to feel like the main character, but this chapter focuses on him and Rigly. I didn't intend for it to make wolf feel like the main character. This also kinda happened during the entire book, which is also not intended. My only excuse is that it's hard to see things from others' eyes in a story, which is because you don't know what they are thinking and you don't want to make the mistake of offending someone else working with you on the story. So, that's my apology. Finally, a few things to say.
1. This chapter was the most fun for me to write.
2. It's funny how in the story I killed Rigly easily, but when playing battle, I can bearly get a hit on him. So, sorry Rigly for the story making you sound weak.
3. If you have a problem with the unbalanced character issue, just know that I plan to remaster the story when done with it. So, look out for that
Thanks for reading and I'll see you in the next chapter. Goodbye.