astelimar
reading whats below I dont see any point asking for updates about going long, which will either happen or not. But I did thing it worth posting to you that its a good story, well written. From here, I could imagine the story ending with a happily ever after in a chapter or two, or going on to double its length. jack is gormlessly in love without even knowing it, and Josh is resignedly accepting of whatever he can get. Jack is more annoyed at being left out than anything else!