mayatelford

Is far not bad actually. Interesting concept and not so common approach to the story. However, the layout does need improving and the subtraction of the [REDACTED] statement as it distracts and directs the reader away from your point. 
          Otherwise, I'd say well done.

C_K_VI

@mayatelford redacted means that information is taken out. It leaves more mystery but thanks mate
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