Hey lovelies,
I've been having a little play with TW and have changed the chapter headings to show the POV, as this is from four different ones (for the moment). Let me know how it reads! I also edited a couple of bits where I'd been writing in present tense, whereas this should all be third person past. Please let me know if you spot any rubbish tense-I've been writing in first person present for the last two years, so it's hard to get my head around, but I'm getting there!
Enjoy, let me know what you think and please share and vote :)
Cynthia x