CaJaAr
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Hey… so, I’ve just been doing some story planning for my book, “Ash || Max Mayfield X Fem!OC”. Whilst we’re still in S2 currently in that book, I just planned the very end of the story for the first time, and uh… wow. If I pull it off how I plan to do so… yeah.
I’ve been laid awake in bed for the last 2 hour just thinking about it.
Good luck, I guess? :)
CaJaAr
Wow, uh… I haven’t posted in a while. Sorry about that, I’ve been playing “Lost Records: Bloom & Rage” and it’s honestly been all I think about.
It’s just… such a good story for my tastes, and the characters are just… perfect. The perfect blend of teenager in the 90’s themes, fun and tragedy.
I’m going to give you a !!! SPOILER WARNING !!! here, because now I wanna talk about the game and I don’t wanna ruin it for anyone. There’ll be a point later in this message where there’ll be no more spoilers, it’ll be marked.
If you haven’t seen the game, it’s about 4 teen girls in the Summer of ‘95 and how they go from strangers to besties (and maybe more) until tragedy leaves them separated for 27 years. When one of them receives a mysterious package addressed to the group’s old band name, they come back together to reminisce about the past. This is where the game begins, with us following one of the girls (Swann) as she remembers everything that happened.
The game lets you build (or damage) the relationships between Swann and each of the girls (Kat, Autumn & Nora). This includes romance for all three, although I personally chose Kat for my first run (she got me sobbing, not gonna lie, her story just… makes me cry even now).
The story ends with the group (excluding one, if you’ve built the relationships right and chose the best options) opening the package to see what it contains and who sent it (the ambiguous nature of it here is GREAT). This ending part broke me, even if I got the best possible ending the first time around.
Also, there’s some great Easter Eggs in this game.
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Anyway, you’re probably wondering why I’ve rambled on about this game for so long. It’s because… well, I love it. I’m definitely gonna write some stuff for it and maybe, just maybe, you’ll get to see some of it.
Anyway, as always, have a lovely day and enjoy reading! :)
CaJaAr
The absurd amount of hate directed at Stranger Things’s finale is completely unnecessary, and it’s starting to get annoying.
Nothing is prefect, ever, people need to accept that.
The S5 finale episode was, as far as TV Show endings of this category go, a fairly good ending to the show. It topped off plot points, even if there were a few holes here or there, and it gave the characters an open end to let us imagine their stories moving forwards (which, with the crazy amount of clashing and conflict in this fandom, was probably the right choice). I wouldn’t rank it with the best endings ever, but it was good enough that I had no issues while watching it (and that’s coming from someone who’s watched and practically studied the show a dozen times at the very least, likely more).
Stop the hate towards the show and its creators. We all went in expecting Eleven’s fate to be tragic or mysterious, we all went in knowing that there was gonna be plot holes, we all went in knowing character ships probably weren’t gonna happen, we all went in knowing the main cast -other than El- was probably gonna survive. We all went in knowing it wouldn’t be perfect.
It’s fun to have discourse, and to toss around “What if’s?” or whatever, but its not fun to blatantly chastise and scream and shout hate at each other at the creators just because it wasn’t perfect.
Once again, everyone just please relax. I don’t wanna see any more S5 hate on my social media feed, especially when I actually enjoyed the ending quite a bit (yes, I cried).
Anyway… as always, have a lovely day and enjoy reading :)
KyleNew8
@CaJaAr I can't wait until you update any of the Max Mayfield stories because all are good
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CaJaAr
@KyleNew8 I do actually agree with that. The fight should’ve been longer, there should have been some injuries, and I think if they were to add another death, it should’ve been during the Vecna fight. It was a little too easy for what was the final episode, I personally think that they should’ve made the episode a bit longer in return for a harder fight (it was already 2 hours, might as well go longer for more content). You do have to be careful though, if it becomes too seemingly difficult then you risk the chance it isn’t believable as a situation, which detracts from the story. The same is true with character deaths, too much death can be worse than too little. One or two (maybe three at a push) deaths is all the ending could have without feeling dull and repetitive. :)
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CaJaAr
Because I’m bored and wanted to post something, here’s some random character information about my OC “Avelyn Young” that isn’t currently mentioned in the book, “Muted || Remastered // Max Mayfield X Fem!OC”.
The information:
Avelyn is mute, a fact that remains central to the story and character. Whilst not mentioned explicitly as to feel more open to readers, the rough modelling for her specific type of mutism is “Bilateral Vocal Cord Paralysis”. Avelyn experiences this paralysis in the “Open Lateral Position”, which means the vocal cords are stuck far apart, leaving the airway wide open for breathing whilst the cords can’t come together to vibrate and create sound.
People with this form of muteness can result in a breathy, weak voice or even, in Avelyn’s case, complete voice loss. With this condition, an attempt to scream or laugh might result in a "rushing" sound of air or a very faint, airy whisper, but no tonal "voice."
In Avelyn’s case, she’s capable of a faint “wheezing” sound when she tries talking. In truth, this wheezing isn’t technically “wheezing”, but it’s a similar phenomenon that sounds almost identical to most people.
On a side note, Avelyn can still make noises that solely use her tongue, lips or other faculties, just not those that need her vocal cords.
On another tangent, this condition can be treated (not cured), even in the 1980’s when the book is set. Treatment usually involves talking therapies, specific surgeries and more. The reason that Avelyn hasn’t undergone these treatments is because she doesn’t know about them and her parents are horrible people who don’t support her, which can unfortunately be the case for some people.
That’s the end of my little info dump. I don’t really know why I did this, just suppose I was bored and decided to share some facts with you. If you couldn’t tell, I’m writing and editing stuff for Muted right now. You might see some content for it soon, not sure.
Have a lovely day and enjoy reading! :)
CaJaAr
Hey, everybody! Right, so I wanted to give a little gift to you all and I thought… what could I do? Then it struck me, why don’t I show you what I’ve been doing? EVERYTHING. Every book I have something to show you for, I will show you something for.
So that’s what I’ve gone and done. It’s all put together across 2 TikTok posts (there’s enough stuff that one wasn’t enough).
For those who want to look what I have going on, here’s a link to Part 1 of the TikTok I put it all on (Part 2 is also on there, but you’ll have to find it through my account on TikTok, I posted them together so it shouldn’t be hard):
https://vm.tiktok.com/ZNRjSJKXJ/
CaJaAr
Huh… I haven’t posted in a while. I’ll try and get something for you soon. Sorry for all the waiting, I know my update schedule is absolutely horrible. I should have more time to write now that I’m free from college for Christmas.
Thanks for your patience with me :)
Orodoros
@CaJaAr no worry just look at the long of chap it fine to wait. And like next part of Mute are going to be fire. Take your time
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GraysonCreates
@CaJaAr hey, life can be hectic sometimes so do what you gotta, we'll be ready for the updates when you're ready
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CaJaAr
Right… I’m having a moment. It’s a good moment, but it’s still a moment.
I’m just lore-diving for Supernatural, looking into how the semantics of the world works so that I can build a character for a fanfic and… holy moly. I start lore-diving with a general idea of a character, and I can’t make up just how well it fits into Supernatural’s world.
Now, obviously, I need to adjust things but still… it feels like I have ultra instinct or something.
Just thought I’d post something random here, and this was prevalent so… yay? :)
CaJaAr
I’ve just started watching Supernatural for the first time and I’m absolutely loving it (and yes, I have fanfic ideas already).
The issue is, I have to use a VPN to watch it on Netflix in the UK, but it’s leaving Netflix altogether in just over a week from now.
I know it’s on Prime Video, and I do have Prime Video, but I hate that app so much, especially when watching regular shows costs money upfront (this seriously irks me). I also know it’s on HBO Max (I think that’s the other main one, I might be wrong), but I don’t have that at all and it’d be a hassle to get it.
Anyone got any ideas? It’d be especially useful if anyone knows it’s on something with a MiniPlayer, since I use that when writing fanfic to help with dialogue and all that, although I’d honestly be happy to know where I can watch it even without MiniPlayer.
Have a lovely day and enjoy reading :)
KyleNew8
I think in the Urge story I think Rhianna will be a mix of Enid and Pip (a good girls guide to murder)
CaJaAr
What’s your opinion on witches and witchcraft, dear audience? I have an odd feeling that some of you will like that type of content.
I’m asking because I do have a witchy fanfic for Stranger Things that I might release soon if people like that idea. Just thought I’d probe the area first :)