Cahezy

@inqberry45  Actually, I've found your descriptions to be wonderful! And once you've finished your rewrite there'll only be good impressions in the beginning :)
            
            I'll probably watch the movie soon, I've seen clips and it looks amazing :D

@Cahezy Ohhh, don't be ashamed XD
            All I am going to say is that it was amazing.
            
            Thank you! Yes, I do have quite a bit of grammtical mistakes, lack in description, and all things important. I'm sort of upset because my writing definitely gets better later on in the book, because I'm slowly learning. And when people first read the book, their first impression is bad lol.
            
            
            Yay! Me too :)

@inqberry45  Ah I rarely ever watch movies, so that's news to me. I haven't even watched the Alice in Wonderland movie myself, and I'm ashamed XD
            
            Good luck on your rewrite! When I read the first couple chapters I did notice several punctuation mistakes, so I'm looking forward to seeing how it is when you're done :)