Hey me again, sorry for the sudden bother you're probably busy, but I took your advice and made a new fanfiction and I was wondering what you think of it. I tried to make the character seem more alive and some of the other things you pointed out to me.
@Silver_Lee_Shin XD same! I made a pokemon story about my oc x gladion and I was wondering if you can give me some tips to see if I need to fix anything or not