@Calissa_Forrester Well, I can't really give you any suggestions plot-based, as I'm still reading book 1 :) I like your writing style, especially the descriptions (they're my favorite!)
Keep up the good work!
Alrighty folks, it's back, the final and complete version of the first book in the Queen trilogy! Rewritten and remastered. I hope you all enjoy.
https://www.wattpad.com/222573554-soul-chapter-1