FlynnsFryingPan
the glasses in ur profile picture, I have the same ones
FlynnsFryingPan
Hye I need a little bit of help
I edited the book, well lets say LITERALLY CHANGED THE STORY
published one prologue and chapter till now can u check it out and tell me if there is a room for improvement or not?
the story is 'blood moon' and its a post apocalyptic thriller (zombie apocalypse duh -_-) and can you plz check out the prologue and chapter and give me some critical reviews as to what needs to be improved
CallMeStoned
@LuciferLikesIcecream I am loving Blood Moon, sis! The story seems lit so far, just work on the typos, punctuations and spacing. Thank you for sharing it *hug*
FlynnsFryingPan
Hey can you suggest me some good zombie books
CallMeStoned
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@LuciferLikesIcecream I can't fuck with that. Let me check out your book *insert stars* ...I'ma get back to you soon, homie.
FlynnsFryingPan
@CallMeStoned oki there is this book Virus and its THE MOST CRINGE BOOK EVER 99% of the time they are talking about the relationship of two teens who met 6 days ago and love each other already and the protagonist is a cry baby and started crying because apparently her boyfriend didn't mention her in the most attractive girls over here list (because he wanted revenge on her as she didn't take his name) and then she ended it and said horrible things and ran off crying the rest 1% is when thy r actually fighting zombies