Calla2468

Hey everyone, just a reminder that my story starts getting uploaded tomorrow. Some quick housekeeping:
          	
          	I have scheduled the uploads to come out of even days. 
          	
          	I am uploading this book for feedback and am quite desperate for some. Be as harsh and critical as you like. I won’t take anything to heart.
          	
          	Lastly I’m not going to publicly publish this. I will be indi publishing to friends and family. If you want a copy we can negotiate. You can contact me at (adelaideproudfoot@gmail.com). Also this is the first book of a series and I have already started on the second book though it is in the very early stages so don’t expect to get to read it anytime soon. I will only publish it when I need feedback on it and it is in the final stages of editing like this book.
          	
          	That is about it. I hope you enjoy the story and please, please, please give me feedback. Thanks a ton.
          	
          	- Adelaide 

greengreenbarley

Hey! I just came across your profile by chance, but I haven't met a lot of other Christians/homeschool grads/people from big families on Wattpad before (I am a high school senior, oldest of 5). You seem like such a cool person! God bless your day <3

Vanilla_Ewe

Hiiii!!! I would just love to say hi!! <3 I absolutely adore of you that you help explain God’s message in great detail, and I am a fellow Christian too! So that’s pretty cool. You seem like such a vibe and sweet person to be around, so I am giving you the follow!! Have an absolute lovely day, God bless you bestie! <3

Calla2468

Thank you. What's your favourite book in the Bible? I'd have to say mine is Mathew. Currently, I've written a story that's a slow burn enemies to lovers, though the lovers part will come later on in the series but I really need feedback for it. I have a few things in mind but I want other people's perspectives first so I can do a big edit. You don't have to though. I hope you have a great day.
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Calla2468

Hey everyone, just a reminder that my story starts getting uploaded tomorrow. Some quick housekeeping:
          
          I have scheduled the uploads to come out of even days. 
          
          I am uploading this book for feedback and am quite desperate for some. Be as harsh and critical as you like. I won’t take anything to heart.
          
          Lastly I’m not going to publicly publish this. I will be indi publishing to friends and family. If you want a copy we can negotiate. You can contact me at (adelaideproudfoot@gmail.com). Also this is the first book of a series and I have already started on the second book though it is in the very early stages so don’t expect to get to read it anytime soon. I will only publish it when I need feedback on it and it is in the final stages of editing like this book.
          
          That is about it. I hope you enjoy the story and please, please, please give me feedback. Thanks a ton.
          
          - Adelaide 

Calla2468

Hey, everyone. It's been a long time. For the past few years I have been working on a story and I am now in the midpoint to endpoint of editing it. Which is so exciting but the problem is that I have struggled to find people who are willing to look over it and give me feedback. Once I have finished with this current round of edits I will be posting it on here. Please give me your guidance or even just tell me which parts you liked. For now I will give you the title. It's called, 'Trust'. I look forward to all your comments.

AuthorJMColes

The Art and Craft of Writing Christian Fiction: The Complete Guide to Finding Your Story, Honing Your Skills, and Glorifying God in Your Novel https://a.co/d/bHC3P6C

Calla2468

Thank you very much. I really appreciate it. A book on writing that I have read that has helped me is ‘Story’ by Robert McKee. It’s more on screenwriting than story writing but much of the principles are the same.
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AuthorJMColes

I’ve had the privilege of taking instruction from Heff Gerke and I think you’ll enjoy his book 
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