CallieRenah

@gunsandroses1973 you would want more detail on Eli 

Well, Callie's in Texas for a party right? A sweet 16? Well, you should go into a more detailed diecription of the family. The brother and sister you mentioned. You already brought Eli into it so you should, at least, add in the name of the sister. It adds a more realistic point of view to your story

@gunsandroses1973 any idea as to what I should do next?

@gunsandroses1973 hi

@TheQueenCallie girll